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About Me

I am Ryan, and this is my English I Portfolio. I am in 9th-grade, and I love to play video games. The best video games, in my opinion, are Overwatch and Heroes of the Storm. I love school with my favorite subjects Math and Science. I also love food and having a great time. I love having parties to watch a baseball game with some friends. I also enjoy swimming with my close friends. There is one thing in this world where I spend most of my time. That one thing is baseball. I play baseball, and I watch baseball. There is nothing better than baseball. I love a lot of things, but one thing that I hate is dishonest people. I would like to know the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth.

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